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If I were a giant, I could reach up into the sky,
And take down all the stars, to put a twinkle in your eye.
It could begin with a spark, and I could watch it grow,
Sometimes wonderfully fast, others painfully slow,
Through the fun filled highs to the desperate lows,
I would water you with love, because you would be my rose.

But as the days become darker, and the twinkle grows dim,
And you feel like you're standing at the edge of the rim,
When all you can feel is hatred and pain,
I'll still be there, keeping you sane.

Because if God is love, then you must be a saint,
You were always there with a halo so faint,
If somebody ever tried to take it away,
Then they would still be trying to this very day.

If I were a vampire, I could make you feel cold,
And bite you on the neck, so you never grew old.
I could fly you away, and we could make a fresh start,
But I would miss the quiet beating of your tender heart.

We could love forever, and never die,
But what would happen to the twinkle in your eye?
Your body would be as cold as ice,
Your hands would grip me like a vice.
Your eyes would be frosted over and cold,
And all of that just so we couldn't grow old.

So I think it would be best if I just stayed as me,
So I could live like a human, alongside your beauty.
So we could grow old and die together,
Riding out this cold and stormy weather.
:iconpatrickman1994:

Author's Comments

Overflowing with corniness...

Written for ~Ariel-Shadow (A.K.A Maddie) because she's awesome and I love her.

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:iconariel-shadow:
:) You are so sweet. You even wrote that it was for me. I wasn't expecting that. Well I love it - I think it is the most beautiful thing ever and I especially like the bit about vampires.

I love you and I will miss you......

xoxo

--
Always forgive your enemies, nothing annoys them so much - Oscar Wilde.
:iconpatrickman1994:
Gawr, shucks. Thank you so much, I hope you have fun.

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AND THEN THEY ALL ASPLODED!



I eat left socks and unborn babies.
:icongoofy-charli:
Oh

My

Gosh

Maddie has to feel like the most loved girl in the WORLD right now! That was so sweet, especially the first verse with giants and eye twinkling. You have some serious talent. You should think about writing poetry on the side when you leave school.

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I like to imagine that the world is one big machine.
Machines never have any extra parts.
They have the exact number and type of parts they need.
So I figure if the entire world is a big machine,
I have to be here for some reason...
:iconpatrickman1994:
Hehe, thanks. I don't think I'm that good, but I don't think Maddie would mind if I practised writing poems by using her as a topic.

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AND THEN THEY ALL ASPLODED!



I eat left socks and unborn babies.
:icongoofy-charli:
I don't think she would mind at all, in fact I think she would be elated. It'd be a nice surprise for her when she gets back if you had another amazing poem written up. (wink wink)

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I like to imagine the world is one big machine
Machines never have any extra components
They have the exact number and type of parts they need
So if the entire world is a machine and I'm a part of it,
I have to be here for some reason...
:iconpatrickman1994:
I get your drift, if you know what I mean. (wink wink)

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AND THEN THEY ALL ASPLODED!



I eat left socks and unborn babies.

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